Well, thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't too sure about it myself.

That said, I had another version of the last (shorter) verse, but I thought it may be interpreted as a little inappropriate.

That, and I liked the one I went with better.

You see, he doesn't try to hide it,
'Cause he's not right in the head.
Now he's taken hold of Asako,
And they're bouncin' on the bed!


Thanks again!

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