Well, thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't too sure about it myself.

That said, I had another version of the last (shorter) verse, but I thought it may be interpreted as a little inappropriate.

That, and I liked the one I went with better.

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You see, he doesn't try to hide it,
'Cause he's not right in the head.
Now he's taken hold of Asako,
And they're bouncin' on the bed!

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Thanks again!

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