[Thanks, Phaedrus. I was kind of worried about the double line break working to shift from the emotion to its reason. That being said, you've managed to shame me into a tighter (well, rhyming, anyway ) form...]

For the lonely fanboy's thoughts, a dime:
If I were dreaming
then to each other we'd be beaming
name and number, 'twixt us deeming
each the other worth our time;


but this while Kimiko weaves
around a heart that grieves
a net of self-reliance
forgetful, in her defiance,
that her fear is not alliance:

that trust causes not betrayal,
nor her dreams another's love to fail,
but that on a silent hill or icy dale,
that when the darkness closes near:
all you need is b33r.

[Sorry. Started channeling Largo for a second there. Let me try that again.]

that trust causes not betrayal,
nor her dreams another's love to fail,
but that the losing hurts so much
because the having is so much.

And that the fanboy thinks he knows,
from having watched too many tv shows.

-_Quinn

[ September 30, 2001: Message edited by: Quinn ]

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