In the '1337' manuscript, several passages appear to contradict translations from other works. Consider Secrets 3:20, in which Yamiko's handiwork is particularly evident...

[Apparent original.]

Hidden eyes' power:
to tantalize, to control
imagination.

[Yamiko's edit.]

Hidden eyes, like all
mysteries, have the power
to tantalize, guide
imagination, control
it, and to create devotion.

[The '1337' version.]

Hidden eyes' weakness:
to discover illusion
you must call her bluff.

-_Quinn

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