This isn't in the maekuzuke thread, but I liked the idea so much that I tried adapting a song I'd just written to the form. It's in response to 526/527. Enjoy.

please look out below
I'm falling in love again
my heart beats faster

I can't tell if it's from love
or the ground rushing closer

please look out below
I feel like I'm flying now
I don't know if it's

because of her smile or from
terminal velocity

because I can't say
when she looks inside of me
if it's through her heart

or my body on the street;
if she isn't my heaven

then this will be hell --
look out below, I'm falling
in love again.

- _Quinn

[Also, I'd like to second masamage's not-complaining. ]

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